Author's Note

I just like to say that this story was inspired by this Machinima: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-HNwXUcvNVw It's a really great one, and I recommend you all watch it. It's one of the few Machinima that I like. :D

Oh, and please give me your opinions on my story! I would love to hear your thoughts because I want to improve my story in any way possible!

Thanks!